It is true that the migration rate to the cities for having better opportunities is getting increased, but it has its own difficulties. There are various reason for this problem, but several measures can be taken by governments to ease the problem for every citizen especially for newcomers.
As people migrate from the rural to the cities, they will face many problems. First of all, the living cost in cities is much more than what it is in the countryside. The expenses of renting an apartment, transportation, and food is higher than the same costs in the rural. Secondly, cities are crowded, polluted, and noisy. Thirdly, Cities are suffering from the traffic congestion. Finally, the crime, poverty, and homelessness rates are being increased day by day in cities. These would be a serious threat to the migrants to the cities who are not familiar with these kinds of troubles and hardships.
There are definitely some solutions to tackle the mentioned problems. The government must decentralize the living facilities from the metropolises, and develop the provincial towns and rural areas. In addition, the government should give more importance to the agricultural industries by providing modern equipment to the village residents, and raise the incomes of the farmers. Moreover, some recreational facilities need to be developed for the people who are living in the rural areas to enable them to have cheerful moments.
In conclusion, migration from small towns to big cities would have serious problems, and the government could take some serious measures to address the negative consequences.
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the rural to the cities, they will face many problems. First of all, the living ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28404669261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92809765 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8354088047 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244969584271 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739010653494 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423862473405 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135713010677 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358786552147 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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