Some exclusive features of elephants
The passage and the talk both discuss the some features of elephants. The writer contends that elephants have some exceptional features that other cratures do not possess. The lecturer, however, refutes the author's assessments. She demonstrates three reasons to cast doubt on the claims made in the reading.
The first allegation of the script against which the orator argues is that when elephants get old they will be aware of approaching their death. Therefore, they go to areas in adjacency of waters to die alone. In contrast, the professor highlights the fact that this is just a matter of speculation and is not true. She says that when elephants get old, their teeth wear away and they can not feed on vegetations they used to eat. As a result they abandon their habitats to find softer plants. She further asserts that these kind of vegetations usually can be found near waters, so elephants go to such places to graze.
Second, according to the text, elephants have artistic spirits and can paint some astounding painting, which is their exclusive feature among animals; although the speaker finds this idea debatable. She bolsters her opinion by stating that eras if elephants are very sensitive and by touching them people can make them to do particular actions. For example, humans use these attributes of them to instruct them how to move brush and paint some special things. Therefore, these abilities are tought them bu humans and are not some innate skills.
Lastly, the lecture contradicts this fallacy of the passage that elephants have a fear of mice, saying that elephants are unfamiliar with mice and it is an intrinsic demeanor among animals to avoid from strange things. For instance, elephants in the zoos do not show such a behavior because they used to mice and know that they are not a threat for them. Not being harmed by mice, elephants do not run away from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...e passage and the talk both discuss the some features of elephants. The writer conte...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...res that other cratures do not possess. The lecturer, however, refutes the authors ...
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Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t feed on vegetations they used to eat. As a result they abandon their habitats to...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...softer plants. She further asserts that these kind of vegetations usually can be found nea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89130434783 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51070967121 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9174827807 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6470588235 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304937740979 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891340581612 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973121055039 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183708347906 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874603536659 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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