You recently went on a trip with a friend and you booth took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask you friend to send you one of the photographs
explan why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Aman,
I hope you and your family are doing well. It was such a pleasure to see you again on our Jaipur trip.We sure had a great time catching up with each other after so many years. You have always been a cherished friend, no matter how much of a gap there has been since we met.
Anyway, the reason I am writing is that I need a photograph of mine. I hope you remembered we clicked photos in traditional dresses in front of Jal Mahal. Can you please send me that photograph as soon as possible and that too before this Wednesday.
The reason for asking only that particular photograph is that as you know I'm applying for modelling.Therefore, in that case it will be an add-on to my portfolio and next week I am going for an interview.
As you are aware that its rainy season over here and I like to cherish the rain. So, I went in rain along with my waterproof bag. When I returned home, to my surprise the water went inside that bag and it damaged my photograph. I was so upset at that time and then you suddenly striked my mind. Hope you will not let me down.
See you soon and always stay in touch.
Best regards,
Kavita
P.S. I miss you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...ure to see you again on our Jaipur trip.We sure had a great time catching up with ...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...rticular photograph is that as you know Im applying for modelling.Therefore, in th...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...t as you know Im applying for modelling.Therefore, in that case it will be an add-on to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, so, then, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26576576577 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45378102356 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5805611038 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6428571429 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349456972603 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118909930932 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593497176107 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17127085277 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681120588905 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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