Satisfaction is one of the most important aspects of one's life. If one is satisfied, he/she will be happy, peaceful and healthy as well. The important thing to be kept in mind is that reaching level of satisfaction is not one day process, it is a struggling process.
In today's era, when we are surrounded by multiple tasks, responsibilities it becomes tough to give time to oneself and to even think about satisfaction. Satisfaction comes with success and to be successful lots of hard work is involved. There might be cases where one is successful but not satisfied. Satisfaction works's on the famous theory which is defined by Abraham Maslow, the name of the theory is Maslow need hierarchy theory. Once, physical, financial and social needs of the person are fulfilled then comes the self-actualization need, to attain the aim of life. After attaining Self-actualization needs a person had achieved evening, he has peace, satisfaction, and success.
However, there are instances where people are successful but not satisfied. This usually happens, when one attains all the fame but work-life balance or love is missing from life. It can be overcome easily, people just need to understand that attaining satisfaction and success is not a one day process. These two have the direct relation with each other.
To recapitulate, I would like to say that Peace and success are important ingredients of Satisfaction. Without proper ingredients, satisfaction might not taste well. And yes, of course, satisfied people are the happiest and the healthiest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is one of the most important aspects of ones life. If one is satisfied, he/she will ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14646257842 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9687342331 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175825971732 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594912546492 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448831321101 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108994614531 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399416143961 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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