It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.
The heritage buildings are the pride of any country which tells about some story or incidents. Maintaining such old past buildings can be very expensive but in my opinion, these buildings are much valuable to us as losing on such buildings can disconnect the new generation from the past. This essay will elaborate the significant value of such precious buildings having myriad benefits with supporting examples.
First and foremost, tourism is the best scheme for any government these days. As these beautiful historic buildings are being visited by local public and foreigners too. The tourism rate has been upsurged immensely over the decade due to which government is receiving the enormous fund to feed the country people.
Secondly, due to the historic connection, the new generation also show their interest in history and feel more proud of the serving nation. These tourism activities involve lots of people due to which people are getting employed more easily. Thus this also helps in fighting poverty.
Overall, I reckon, Albeit, preserving the beautiful buildings can be expensive so individuals should contribute equally to this by keeping them clean. Ergo, these buildings are the valuable asset for any nation and it is our moral responsibilities to take care of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...eople are getting employed more easily. Thus this also helps in fighting poverty. ...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... responsibilities to take care of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i reckon, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28640776699 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71025551666 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.164834961 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160787061291 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554510907611 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655221404239 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913851606261 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673490776401 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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