There were some discrepancies between the passage and lecture over the issues of American companies' reactions to eco-certification sustainable forest practices issued by independent international organization for reasons like consumer's trust in the products, price policy,and domestication of products.
In reference to the passage, it states that American companies have exposed too much advertisement and many of their consumers do not trust these products as most mediocre goods are labeled new or improved;however, the lecture refutes this fact. The lecture explains concisely that American consumers treat adverts differently by comparing the companies' claims to the international certified claims and they also have confidence in consumer agencies with independent international reputation.
Furthermore, the the passage also points out that American consumers are motivated by price and eco-certified wood costs more than uncertified wood but the lecture opposes this notion by saying that research shows that consumers buy products that have competing price higher or lower ,for instance 5% difference, than the other and the lecture further states that most consumers are interested in preserving and protecting the environment hence their increased interest in eco-certified wood.
Conclusively, the passage quotes that most American companies sell their goods in United States and may not be interested in international products and certifications;in spite of this,the lecture contradicts this statement by saying that American companies are motivated by foreign competition. It further explains that as many consumers are attracted to eco-friendly and certified products and if American companies are slow to provide,many foreign investors would swoop in American shops to give the consumers eco-certified products that domestic companies cannot provide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09433962264 5.08290768461 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29368469143 2.5805825403 128% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.55342163355 122% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 21.2450331126 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6436976718 49.2860985944 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 269.166666667 110.228320801 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 21.698381199 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06452816374 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445006131445 0.272083759551 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236225491521 0.0996497079465 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458753109324 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270674330529 0.162205337803 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540491133209 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.3589403974 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 53.8541721854 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.0289183223 218% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.93 12.2367328918 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 10.7273730684 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.498013245 187% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.2008830022 214% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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