Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns

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...cides its future growth and development.The claim made by some people believes that...
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... claim made by some people believes that,teaching morality should be foundation of educat...
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...lieves that,teaching morality should be foundation of education on the other hand some peo...
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Suggestion: No
...l reasoning would do more than morality.No doubt morality and logical reasoning ar...
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...cial and important part of the education,however in this world which is becoming more pr...
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...e that logical reasoning will do more. 21st century has been revolutionized in ...
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...y has been revolutionized in many areas.It composes of revolution in science,techn...
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...eas.It composes of revolution in science,technology,medicine,industrialization etc.So to su...
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...chnology,medicine,industrialization etc.So to survive or withstand in these areas ...
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...der to understand what will impact what.This logical reasoning can help him evaluate...
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...mplex scenarios with maximum efficiency.To illustrate this we all NASA has made so...
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...thing that being used in space flight. On the other hand as the world is moving...
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...petition to be at top position sometimes urges human to take wrong or negative st...
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...term benefits:to be at the top position.Contrary the negative paths taken to achieve tha...
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...ths taken to achieve that may have long term harmful repercussions on the society an...
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...ndation with a person so that he or she doesnt become so greedy that he forget about t...
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...about the true human values and moral. Thus to survive,in order to be more effi...
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... human values and moral. Thus to survive,in order to be more efficien...
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...nd moral. Thus to survive,in order to be more efficient and innovati...
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... a part of education foundation so that a individual can be independent.While mor...
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...so that a individual can be independent.While morality is also very important in-orde...
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...mportant in-order to protect environment,society and its people from detrimental harmful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, thus, while, in short, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41554054054 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.9910175235 2.79657885939 143% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9391203531 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 400.75 118.986275619 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 23.4991977007 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 5.21951772744 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333827925719 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198695062731 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141887625423 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198695062731 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141887625423 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 14.1392134831 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.55 48.8420337079 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.1743820225 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.38706741573 132% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.