Essay topics: A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument reveals that the recalled food was not responsible for the illness happened to pets, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.This conclusion has been drawn on the fact that, the recalled food which has caused:vomiting,lethargy and other signs of illness to pets,the chemicals found in that has been found approved forthe use of pet.However there are many other facts or assumptions which are not considered in-order to make such conclusion that their food was not responsible and no more resources to be devoted for the investigation.
Firstly,It is found that from the tests on recalled food:all chemicals found in the food were approved in the pet food,so there is no doubt on food chemicals being used.But it may happen that the chemicals which were approved by the concerned food team,may have done some blunder or human error in calculation of chemical composition which has caused the big damage in million pounds food.If the company stops further investigation then the same issue may occur again, leading to illness to thousands of pets.So it is very important to consider this element in order to reach any conclusion which is no thought by company.
Secondly,apart from chemicals, there may be other factors which should be given a analysis like:quality of raw material used to prepare that,How is huge volume to food storage maintained and protected from any vulnerable insects or any,How is packaging of food material done which is suppose to stay healthy and qualitatively for long time.All this unstated statements need to be thoroughly analysed and looked into.
In-order to make any such conclusion that their food was not responsible for damage done to pets and no more resources to be devoted for the investigation will be considered poorly analysed decision and if the above mentioned factors are not considered it may happen in near future that company face the same complaints and pets will suffer from illness.
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- Essay topics: A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from th 37
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Essay evaluation report
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the arguments are not on the right track. Here goes a sample:
https://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-argument-task-essays/pet-food-company-r…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1629 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.805 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.6 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.141 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.533 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.802 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'pet'.
Suggestion: pet
...responsible for the illness happened to pets, and the company should not devote furt...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... further resources to the investigation.This conclusion has been drawn on the fact t...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lethargy
... recalled food which has caused:vomiting,lethargy and other signs of illness to pets,the ...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...hargy and other signs of illness to pets,the chemicals found in that has been found ...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...s been found approved forthe use of pet.However there are many other facts or assumptio...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s been found approved forthe use of pet.However there are many other facts or assumptio...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to be devoted for the investigation. Firstly,It is found that from the tests ...
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Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...investigation. Firstly,It is found that from the tests on recalle...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...n the food were approved in the pet food,so there is no doubt on food chemicals bei...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...s no doubt on food chemicals being used.But it may happen that the chemicals which ...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , may
...were approved by the concerned food team,may have done some blunder or human error i...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...tion which has caused the big damage in million pounds food.If the company stops furthe...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...d the big damage in million pounds food.If the company stops further investigation...
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Line 2, column 526, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...leading to illness to thousands of pets.So it is very important to consider this e...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lusion which is no thought by company. Secondly,apart from chemicals, there may...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apart
...t by company. Secondly,apart from chemicals, there may be other fact...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... be other factors which should be given a analysis like:quality of raw material u...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , How
...ity of raw material used to prepare that,How is huge volume to food storage maintain...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , How
...ected from any vulnerable insects or any,How is packaging of food material done whic...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ackaging of food material done which is suppose to stay healthy and qualitatively for l...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...healthy and qualitatively for long time.All this unstated statements need to be tho...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e thoroughly analysed and looked into. In-order to make any such conclusion tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15527950311 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01959829176 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 22.8473053892 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.198021565 57.8364921388 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 415.0 119.503703932 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.5 23.324526521 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 5.70786347227 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323665060599 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206061060216 0.0743258471296 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646945226414 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206061060216 0.128457276422 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646945226414 0.0628817314937 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.1 14.3799401198 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.72 48.3550499002 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.197005988 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32208582834 134% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 12.3882235529 234% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 11.1389221557 305% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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