Every country has poor people and different ways to deal with them. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons for your answer and include a relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty is alamarigly rising as compare to past different nations find various ways to overcome with grave issue but it still on boil. A well organized, cooperative approach is required to completely remove this malady from society, it will boost the nation's wealth.
Poverty is a curse to society, it snatches the happiness. These are various reasons, that leads to destitution, to begin with, unemployment is the prime factor that upgrades this situation and it adversely affects the nation's economy. Illiteracy is also a worrying factor, as it causes inhibition in the development of skilled professionals. Uganda is the most impoverished African country, as per a recent serve, Uganda has the highest illiteracy rate as compare to other African countries. Overexploitation of the natural resources causes famine like condition and deprivation. This may be due to a continuous rise in the population. Here, Utter Pradesh a state in India, is worth mentioning, continuous rise in population in the state results in starvation and niche of various of disease and crime.
Poverty hinder the development of society, to free the nation from this evil. Firstly, a free education should be made mandatory, it will make people more aware of their basic rights and improve their quality of life. To increase the employment rate, a well-organized infrastructure should be made that provide more job opportunities to educated people and reverse the deprivation situation. To control the population rate, education has a sizeable share and government also adopt various policies that limit the population. For example, Indian government introduced different policies such as one girl child have free education. Such policies have a two-way positive impression on society like it put a limit on population rise and also decline the illiteracy rate. Further, a balanced usage of natural resources, so that famine-like conditions should be avoided.
To conclude this, unemployment, illitercy, over-explotation of resources by population are main reasons of poverty, new infrastructure, free mandatory education can put a limit on this. A shift in attitude and concerted efforts from both government and cooperative giants will surely improve the situation, and leads to better tomorrow, devoid of hunger and poverty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... malady from society, it will boost the nations wealth. Poverty is a curse to society,...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... situation and it adversely affects the nations economy. Illiteracy is also a worrying ...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'hinders'.
Suggestion: hinders
...various of disease and crime. Poverty hinder the development of society, to free the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4649859944 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13661458051 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1827614903 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.388888889 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733794642301 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225956599222 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252893371214 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474237754538 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02019895811 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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