When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of building rather than its (outward) appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Architectural influence has have always played a vital role in the construction and now it is more approachable to ubiquitous people. Question is whether focusing on the exterior of the building or having equal influence in its interior. This essay will be discussing about both the aspects either having an exquisite exterior or having beautiful interior and deduce to a conclusion.
To begin with, exterior of the building is the first thing people notice consciously or subconsciously. And usually it is the first impression which is carried on in the long run. So, making the first impression memorable will create a long lasting impression which is generally the exterior of the building. Prime example of this is the beautiful package of items in grocery. Similarly, investing in an external of a building will definitely increase the worth of the housing.
Despite of the instant likeness of exterior beauty it does not guarantee the beautiful interior. However, house is the place of comfort and ease. So, the design should be crafted in a way that makes it easier to live rather than only focusing in the exterior. In addition to this, there are many buildings constructed for the optimum use of space.
To recapitulate, buildings should be constructed as per individual taste. Rather than concerning on the interior or the exterior design, building should be comfortable to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
Architectural influence has have always played a vital role in the const...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14912280702 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94680706851 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548245614035 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9131201502 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107642175858 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396475154272 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452837381831 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739575761868 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390491336496 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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