Environment pollution is too alarming to be manged by individuals . Real change can be made at the goverment level .What extent do you argee or disagree.
It is irrefutable to say that environment pollution has burgeoned in last decade and is causing plenty of problems. I completely agree that, small changes can be made at home, but extensive involvement of government in managing environment can only minimize the effect of environment pollution. This essay will draw some of the efforts an individual can do, but it’s largely government who is responsible for conserving and spreading messages about the detrimental effect environment.
To begin with, the environment pollution has grown rapidly due to industrialization, un-managed urbanization. Firstly raising awareness in people about the harmful effect of pollution is one measure. There are colossal activities that can be performed like raising awareness, managed urbanization, plantation, lessen the use of private vehicles and having plethora public transportation, establishing parks, encouraging people for alternate transportation with joint contribution of the people are some of the efforts which can be implemented from government level.
Furthermore, it is the prime responsibility of individual to conserve the environment but their effort is negligible as the environment pollution has reached at its peak in places and small contribution of individuals is not enough. For instance, the major metropolitan cities of the worlds are facing the environment pollution at topnotch. In capital Delhi, capital city of India the air pollution is 200 percent more that the desired. For these crucial problems only government can play a prominent role.
To recapitulate, an individual can contribute managing their periphery but this problem is not local its national. So efforts of individual are a must but to mitigate the problem which has captured nation, a government should take a strong step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67032967033 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33693401308 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4873767057 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248429709742 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08547345873 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602351666197 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144985660692 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589824632935 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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