Everyone should become a vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
People should neglect non vegetarian food. They should give more preference to vegetarian food as compare to meat because it helps to live hale and hearty . This easy accord with this statement up to extent.
To embark with, there are manifold points to shore my views. First and foremost, the availability of vegetarian food is really worthwhile because, most of individuals like to eat vegetarian meal because it contain a lot of nutrient and protein . It helps to live fit and fine. Secondly, vegetarian food available every nook and corner of the society. Masses do not face any problem to buy this food. These foods are not much expensive everyone can afford it. Most of people do labour for their bread and butter they also can manage their meal.
Nevertheless, few masses like to eat meat because their toung of tasty. For example, in this modern era. Many non vegetarian food variety are available in everywhere. These type of food really tasty and attract to people for eat. Moreover, such foods are very advantageous for patients because when any kind of accident occur any injury. Then doctor also suggest to eat this type food because with the help of this food they can tackle their problems and improve their health. However, these food harms concentrate levels it also increase anger and lust . When individual eat countinuslly these food . They can not concentrate their work and can not get good outcomes.
To sum up, Vegetarian and non vegetarian foods have their own pros and cons . Thus, in my point of view, planting- trees are worthwhile then non vegetarian food because it contains a lot of calory and it is benefical for health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89679715302 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50786819925 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4802973336 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5238095238 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17644543201 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577590412212 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447054018241 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128133822591 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328041642352 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.