Some people belive that studing in university or college is the best route to a successful career while other belive that it is better to get job straight after school discuss both views and give your opnion
Few masses think that studying at university or college is the good way to make successful future. however , rest individuals think that it is great way do work just after school .In my opnion both have their own merits and demerits and i will discuss in further pharagraphs
To embark with, university education is good to get good job in competitive market beacause these days everyone have good education and they are apply for job so if person has good qualification then they can good job .secondly, university student learn many things in university or Colleges and they can learn how utilize their skills then they apply their skills in farms.Furthermore, many times it happen persons salary baised on their qualification employers also decide salary on persons edacation
on the other hand, if student do job just after school and they can get valuable exprience and can apply in productive life also enhance their economy .Apart from this, if person earn money after School they can easily manage their expences as well as self dependant also they get a lot of experience about their life .While, if masses do work after schooling it may happen they can not good job and can apply for promotion
To sum up, university and after schooling have own pros and cons . However, i think university education is good to get job.
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones . Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial .others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games. D 67
- The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider the rich are getting richer and the poor are even more poorer what problems can this solution causes and suggest solutions 78
- some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throuhout their courses 75
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games Discus 64
- Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe that a bicycle is a better way. discuss both view and give your opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, i think, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88986784141 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61449913527 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541850220264 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 523.76224462 49.4020404114 1060% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.0 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.6666666667 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.3333333333 7.06120827912 656% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167521197065 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122812457807 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227747136101 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123281406473 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342293529311 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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