Some people think that university students should specluze in one subject. While other think universities should encourage students learn a range of subject. Discuss both view s and give your opinion.
Few individuals assert that universities should implement many subjects in their study . However, other think only one subject impose in study . Before farming any firm opinion both sides will be discussed in upcoming pharagraph.
To start with, education is the supreme need of human beings in this high tech era. However, if offspring do study in one subject. They can expand the horizon of their knowledge related to their subject. Also, learners will get optimum opportunities to achieve massive success in their life. Because, they will not have burden on their mind. Student can easy solve the difficulties in their career. As a result, student can gain ground according to their field.
Moreover, the range of subject can play a vital role in student future. However, they can get job about their various subject. For example, if learner are unsuccessful in one subject. They will have optimum opportunities. Learners can try in other field related to their subject. Furthermore, student can earn name and fame through the different subject.
In my opinion, I personally believe that, universities should stimulate student to learn more subject. Because, they can try in various fields. Also, learner can scale the height of success with the help of different subject. Such as, in this modernization, student should have neuter types of skills related to their subject. such as, math skills, English, science and so on. These are essential for get the job.
To conclude, given the aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that a term of subjects should enact in universities. As well as, learns can enhance the high salary in one grade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73161644362 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3736809046 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1666666667 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291000265388 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879319341616 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826154400989 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18423033754 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723513627642 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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