Nowadays, the way many people interact with each others had changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make. Has this become a positive or negative development.
Technology has changed the way of communication with among in these days. Internet is part of technology which help to make the relationship stronger together. Through the internet, people can communicate at every nook and corner in the world. This essay will examine main advantage followed by disadvantage.
On the one side, internet is the Chief reason to make the interaction with each other. First and formost, there are several types of social apps are available in the mobile phone such as, WhatsApp, hike, Instagram, Facebook and so on. With the help of these apps people can easily communicate with others. However, considering the benefits of internet, it is blessed for human beings. Because, gone are the days, individual communicated by face to face. Moreover, using the internet for different purposes such as, education, communicate and others is worthwhile to achieve massive success in their life. Adding to it, the trend of accessing internet more and more is leading to many benefits, for example, in high tech era people have adopted the internet because, they want to save the precious time of their life.
On the flip side, technology is a key factor of negative impact on human beings. Using the internet for interact with each others is the main reason of generation gap. Because, children follow the same trend which is followed by younger. However, people spend more time on the Internet for various purposes. Also, they think that, internet is a good idea to make the interaction with among. The trend of using internet more and more is leading to many health hazards such as, eye sight, heart problem s and so on. It has become a worring concern issue for individual.
To conclude, making the interaction is a good idea for people. because, it is a convenient for every persons life. Secondly, there are a lot of negative points of using the technology. Because it creates the many problems for individuals life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
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Suggestion: Because
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65304291077 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504615384615 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3020948606 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8636363636 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7727272727 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219195755275 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067095062583 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553636856706 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142023791276 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348173869587 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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