As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different opinions what the obligations of a business should have. It is true that creating profit is the basic prerequisite for a company, but I agree they should develop strategies to bring more benefits for society.
On the one hand, I believe that making money is a huge contribution for the development of society. If companies get more profits, they enable increase a lot of taxes for governments that use to build a civilized society by spending on hospitals, schools,... Besides, the synonym of earning money is able to expand their businesses, which creates more work opportunities for people.
On the other hand, I would argue that companies should be socially responsible with two main reasons. Firstly, the commitment to environmental protection must be enforced because of emission from increasing numerous of factories, which causes to global warming. Therefore, the compliance for disposal of waste is an important duty. Secondly, using money for charity and financing scholarships does not only bring the reputation for companies, but also can contribute to better community.
In conclusion, although making profits is an indispensable element to the survival of companies, I accept that all businesses should profoundly reflect upon their social responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: , .
...ociety by spending on hospitals, schools,... Besides, the synonym of earning money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16662280671 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6510292024 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157931751705 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599369969575 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569180529572 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986181393681 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393721581453 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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