The Internet has increased our access to information.to what extent do think its a good thing.
Our access to the vast amount of information has been dramatically increased by the internet. It has been had impacted us with its information's coffer in a good way and I believe this is a merit. This essay will first discuss how it is helping us in getting an education and then, discuss its benefits from consumer's point of view.
The traditional ways of learning have changed a lot with the advent of the internet. while setting in front of their computers, people are getting the education online from universities which are out of their reach otherwise.
For example, many people, in past, could not attend Standford University just because of the economic hindrance but now they are realizing their dreams being taught online. moreover, the internet has been playing a role as a catalyst in major scientific breakthroughs because research papers and journal are constantly uploaded and updated on websites for public viewing. such as, machine learning algorithms paved the ways for software engineers to develop the autonomous vehicles.
from the perspective of a consumer, I believe that internet has brought revolution in trade. companies from every field of life are doing e-marketing, and thanks to this practice, now people not only have more options but also they can make more informed decisions. moreover, it gives us the opportunity to buy things which are not produced or sold in our countries. for example, Amazon, an e-commerce giant, sold products worth of billions of dollars in all over the world.
in conclusion, as the internet is increasing the availability of information, educational and economic development is inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21722846442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90340692533 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6710663268 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161425528616 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587824959718 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669726208708 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896974478789 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624066820899 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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