Nowadays, the problem of animal extinction reaches great attention. That is why animal conservations have been created in order to save endangered animals. Nevertheless, animal conservations are not only the places for animals but also hunters. Many hunters go to conservations to get pleasure from hunting.
Nowadays there are many species which are in stage of extinction and governments are trying to save these endangered animals by building conservations. Some people believe that animal conservations are used for hunting the endangered animals and blame the people to fulfill their passion and wishes. This essay will discuss views why the need of conservations for animals is required and how people use these conservation as hunting species and explore the logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are myriad and multifarious reasons which state that for existence of mimic houses for wild animals. One of them is to give secure atmosphere for their development. People believe that animals such as lions, tigers, rhino, giraffe others which do not have wild atmosphere due to deforestation stray to societies and dangerous for societies. Authorities belong to animal care, catch them and put in controlled developed area for measuring their pain and some need to cure them. In addition, they present a small outlook to public for wildlife animals. Hence the necessity of mimic wildlife as conservation is required.
Secondly, there are embalmed in affluent people who have passion to hunt these endangered animals and collude their self in these offenses. People argue that hunting not only cause loss of animals but it diminishes all endangered animals. Hunting these days like shooting ducks, lions and wild pig become passion of affluent people. They believe that ebriety of life come to end in hunting of these decent animals.
In recapitulate, this essay has discussed why animal’s conservations are required and reason of hunting in daily life. Deforestation, human population is major factors which influence of extinction of these species. I believe that hunting is not a game to play with life deaf animal, it should be stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31506849315 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81862422505 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7866944548 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355597292137 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119989702909 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896666720167 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222302440566 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863746253594 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.