World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership.
So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Babiism and genocide can easily be seen in the different part of history such as ancient, medieval and modern times. Researches bring out an interesting fact about bloody acts is that violent was often committed by male ruler than female. Therefore, maintain a peace in world require female ruler or leader. In my view, this notion is correct and female leaders can be give chance to usher peace in turbulent times when war seems to more likely in some parts of world.
There are different rationales that support that female could help to reduce violence among countries. First and foremost, it is considered that females are more kind and affectionate than men and nature inculcates these qualities by default. So it is easy for them to think about the solutions which are pro peace. For instance, British prime-minister Teresa May led the Brexit movement and resolved the conflicts between section of people supporting different opinions and not even a single drop of blood was fallen. Secondly, women do not have tendency to create history or become famous by killing people or perpetrating crimes to innocent people. History itself throw a light on male ruler invaded different places and not only killed the weak people but also executed the heinous crimes on women such as rape, slavery or push young girls for sex trade. It is perceived that action taken by women may lead to conflict or may be converted into war but female rules would not allow rapes or child molestation in any scenario.
Finally, modern world acknowledged that female leader work diligently and enough competent in dealing the today’s issues. For last two decades, positon of the women improved and literacy increase exponentially. As a result, women became independent thinks and have ability to take her decision in interest of peace and people. For instance, New Zealand prime-minster declined to take any action on refugees especially from war-torn countries like Syria and helped them to settle in different parts of country.
To sum-up, though anyone male or female could be exceptional leader following the peace, history and nature both talks in favour of women as more indulging in peace. Thus women can be given better leadership positon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09239130435 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59215202615 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611413043478 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8665071095 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241337316863 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071210194884 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487763506136 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140920932348 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554971820801 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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