Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing in response to the disagreement of closing the sports and leisure centre of Shantidham locality. I would like to let you know how the centre is useful to us and what effects will be caused because of its closure.
Let me explain you in detail, firstly, not only me but my parents and friends are frequent visitors of the club where we enjoy playing badminton , gymming, swimming and playing squash . It is a place where we get reenergized after a hectic day and get a chance to enjoy our time with friends and family.
Secondly, the centre have also helped in maintaining us in good health because mostly people have reduced their time watching television and moved their focus towards improving their metabolism to fight against minor diseases.
Finally, our area does not have any ground or joggers park to perform such activities. People will have to travel long distance to avail the facility in other town. The unity of local residents will again go for a toss. Therefore, we request you to rethink on the plan to closedown the centre. I would like to help you to get enrollment of few other members, that would help raise some money.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully ,
x.y.z
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he club where we enjoy playing badminton , gymming, swimming and playing squash . ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n , gymming, swimming and playing squash . It is a place where we get reenergized ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d to hearing from you. Yours faithfully , x.y.z
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72811059908 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46168993892 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658986175115 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1594950911 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109987839156 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453798645288 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493202686918 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454174882763 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290221354362 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.