The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries
The bar chart illustrates the number of medals that twelve countries achieved at the Olympic Games. At first glance, it is evident that the total number of medals won by the USA is the highest of the twelve areas, while the figures for China are the lowest.
The USA obtained around 2300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. The second most successful country is Soviet Union that has less than a half in the total number of medals won by the USA, at 1000 medals. The UK, France, Germany and Italy gained more than 500 Olympic medals and each type of medals has similar statistics.
The rest of the countries achieved just under 500 medals. Sweden and Hungary have the similar number of each medal, at approximately 450 medals. The number of medals gained by China is the lowest with about 200 gold medals and 200 medals for silver and bronze.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73885350318 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25041861676 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6724497558 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349982767664 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163734232179 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103496759663 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264322345515 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963215185551 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.