School age children and teenagers usually like to do the same things as their friends but parents often have a different idea about what their children have a different idea about what their children should be doing
Should pảents always decide how children spend their free time?
With the development of society, there is no doubt that children should have the best education from parents and parents should not compell them do what they want.
There are 3 main causes explain why parents should not always decide how children spend their time. Firstly, children need to have self-confident and stand on one's own feet and that from children decide what they do by themselves. Standing on one's own feet make they know how to choose what is good, what is badand get the blame for themselves. Secondly, children need to be free, children who is not a bird in cage is the cloud free and funny. Children who decide life by themselves are successful than another. Finally, parents impose their viewpoint on children which make children inferiority complex and stress. Inferiority complex and stress lead some mentally ill in children.
Children decide what they do but still in control of parents. There are the reason why children still in control of parents. Firstly, children do not clearly understand about what they do sonthey need supervision and decision of parents. They can make somthing wrong when they do not have instructions from parents. Secondly, something they can not decide by themselves without their parents and they need the protect from parent.
In contrast, children is the best thing on the world and they need comprehensive education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ves without their parents and they need the protect from parent. In contrast, children is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0350877193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56150864961 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1446699924 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358627554437 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147711016069 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658444958855 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215171270076 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859622071113 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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