Today's world is reeling under the effects of hate crimes and cross-country terrorism. It is often believed that events such as intercountry sports meet will help to propagate the message of peace and brotherhood in the world. I completely agree with this view and in the course of my essay, will shed some light on the reasons which have shaped my opinion.
Any sport, if played in the right spirit, has several advantages for the society. Firstly, it helps to instill the spirit of nationalism in each human being. Both the players and spectators get emotionally stirred by a feeling of pride to one's own country. Playing of the respective national anthems before any intercountry sporting event is an example to prove this point. Secondly, we cannot refute the fact that it gives immense joy when the spirit of the game overcomes the petty barriers of countries and cultures because national teams often have players from different ethnicities and backgrounds. This helps to spread the message of oneness and unity in diversity. Last but not the least, international sports meet help to ease tension between warring countries as sports often serves as a binding factor between them. To illustrate, passion for a cricket is a common trend which binds the neighboring countries India and Pakistan. International one day games and test matches show us that the players of both countries are quite friendly and amicable off the field. This helps to spread the feeling of brotherhood of mutual admiration. It is not unusual to see the players congratulating each other or laughing at a joke. This teaches us to respect each individual for his virtues, regardless of the intercountry political disputes. Thus, these sports meets between different countries show us that the human spirit and regard for humanity is above political issues and tensions.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the opinion that Sports played at International level helps in easing tensions between countries and helps to spread the message of tolerance, peace, and brotherhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14925373134 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80550329555 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5998743152 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.470588235 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190589230135 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590478902954 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610485116726 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162542889276 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454793299866 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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