The two maps shows the development in stokeford from 1930 to 2018
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of stokeford from 1930 to at the present. It is a clear and coherent represantion.
Overall, it is evident that the town has shown an increase in housing development which indicate a higher population and move away from agriculture and farming
Firstly, the farmland was very large in north east side in 1930 but has been demolished at present and make a more houses and roads. Furthermore, in west side two shops in ztokeford at 1930 but at presend remove the shops and make a road and homes on the placd of shops. Moveover, in east side one primary school in 1930 but at present primary school have developed.
Secondly, thd one tree and large garden in the stokeford at 1930but at present cut the tree and have been removed the garden and constructed the houses on place of the garden or tree. Furthermore, one large house in east side at 1930 however at present has been knocked down the house and build the retirement home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d move away from agriculture and farming Firstly, the farmland was very large in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48797106092 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4287085274 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165279446743 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867259040335 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940821265003 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124690779204 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879050829399 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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