Dear Sir
I am a regular patron of your shop. I have bought a number of electronic equipments from your firm and I was very happy to use them until now,however my last experience with new kitchen product I have bought recently from your shop is bitter. I am writing this missive to express my dissatisfaction about that product.
I visited your renowed Enterprise three weeks ago and I have demanded to show the mixer juicer grinder for my kitchen.One of the employees of your shop showed me the latest brand of mixer and he explained me all the features of that product then I decided to buy that one. When I brought it to my home and used it after few days then it didn't work properly.One side of the mixer that is juicer side was jam.I was shocked and I called on landline number of your shop and complained to your worker and he said me that he will send another worker to check the mixer but two weeks has been crossed, he did not take any action and now he does not pick my phone also.
Given the situation,the reputation of your esteemed firm is at stake. I strongly recommend you to keep surveillance on your staff and I request you to please either replace the mixer or repair it. I will appreciate you if you look after my matter immediately.
Eagerly waiting for your response.
Your sincerely 10th June 2018
Jyotika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...d I was very happy to use them until now,however my last experience with new kitchen pro...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ught recently from your shop is bitter. I am writing this missive to express my d...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... dissatisfaction about that product. I visited your renowed Enterprise three w...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...the mixer juicer grinder for my kitchen.One of the employees of your shop showed me...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...home and used it after few days then it didnt work properly.One side of the mixer tha...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...er few days then it didnt work properly.One side of the mixer that is juicer side w...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...f the mixer that is juicer side was jam.I was shocked and I called on landline nu...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...op and complained to your worker and he said me that he will send another worker to ...
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Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ction and now he does not pick my phone also. Given the situation,the reputation ...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ck my phone also. Given the situation,the reputation of your esteemed firm is at ...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for your response. Your sincerely 10th June 2018 Jyotika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50612244898 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54654628059 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.754910407 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.4 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254092292549 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094200848292 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646744618767 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119845566122 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668026593772 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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