There have been many life changing advances in the last century. Which is the most important invention of the past 100 years the motor vehicles or antibiotics? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Many inventions have brought several advances in our live in past 100 years and those are making people’s live easy and protecting people. Motor vehicle and antibiotics inventions in automobile industry and medical field are the most invention. According to me, antibiotics inventions in medical field are more important than any other invention. This essay will discuss both invention in detail and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, undoubtedly, technology helped automobile industry to grow faster and bring many inventions to make our lives more convenient. Car is one the best inventions in automobile industry because today, there are several cars are available and those are pocket friendly for human and help people to have some relieve in today’s hustle- bustle life. Some cars are environment friendly as well, those help to reduce greenhouse gas emission and save the planet. For example, Japan is more concentrating on Electric cars and those cars helped Japan’s economy growth and environment programs. Therefore, these inventions help in country’s economy and save the planet.
Furthermore, inventions of new antibiotics do wonders in medical fields. These antibiotics have reduced the risk of many deadly diseases and even eradicated some of diseases completely. Now, many vaccines and antibiotics are preventing the diseases at first place. For instance, diseases such as smallpox and malaria which are responsible for killing millions of people, have been virtually eliminated. Thus, these antibiotics saved millions of lives and will continue to be saved millions of lives.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that cars make our live easy and help in economy growth and antibiotic inventions are protecting the world’s population. In my opinion, antibiotics invention is by far the most important and significant discovery in the last century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...d medical field are the most invention. According to me, antibiotics inventions in medical fiel...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the diseases') or simply say ''some diseases''.
Suggestion: some of the diseases; some diseases
...any deadly diseases and even eradicated some of diseases completely. Now, many vaccines and anti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62457337884 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01260229327 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3877727115 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20543629316 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740756295546 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055016396177 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137226763642 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626537587561 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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