Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree with this opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has become a debatable topic among people that whether governments should pay more in education and healthcare or in other sectors, those needs equal attention and solution. I believe that government should identify the highly demanding areas, those needs instant solution and more investment. This essay will discuss both opinions in detail.
To commence with, the governments should invest in education and healthcare because these two are the strongest pillar of any nation and contribute widely in the nation's development. The governments should pay more attention to education in rural area and better healthcare facilities in these areas to develop nation as a whole. For example, Indian' prime minister Mr. Narendra Modi invests more to build up schools and hospitals with better facilities so that everyone gets primary education and treatment as its birth right of every human being.
On the flip side, administrators should invest to save our planet and how to control greenhouse gas emissions in the atmosphere. As if our planet won’t be healthy enough then investment in education and healthcare will be useless. For instance, Japan is the country which give less importance to schooling education and emphasize to educate children about the importance of clean and healthy environment. Therefore, governments should pay more to save the environment.
In conclusion, although government should pay for education and healthcare to make nation's foundation resilient, investment in other sectors cannot be ignored. In my opinion, government should educate people that our environment is seeking for help and we need to save it for our future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...any nation and contribute widely in the nations development. The governments should pay...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to save it for our future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 5.75862068966 469% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49420849421 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91171405544 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0478479848 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281641484392 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115426011015 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069755272266 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185772589043 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795774852404 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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