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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: nitinsuri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In developed countries , most people are using different devices...
^^
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... people are using different devices and some of the devices can reduce the human efforts. I...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evices like mobile, car, home appliances are there to help people and people have...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88990825688 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45258618597 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2142688287 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178391566571 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804498622769 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672838674103 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110196207747 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404237119454 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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