The author clearly shows direct link between the understanding of characters or features inherited by any society and the study of major cities of that society. Author rightly relies on assumption that by getting information about the major cities of any society , we will be able to know about its most features. Just as each society have its own beliefs and traditions, so has some places i.e. cities which greatly describe them. By studying these cities one can get information about the tradition followed by society and practices carried out by its members. For instance, in order to study Punjabi culture one can visit to most famous cities like Amritsar, Anandpur and many more to get good in depth understanding of their culture and historical background. Furthermore, one can know the functioning of the society. The established hierarchy controlling the society. The faults in the society as shown by its city study.The common interests shared by people of that society.All these can be understood by having knowledge about the major cities. For having the knowledge about any society’s characteristics, one must have some good source that best describe that society. Major cities provide us, no better source than these, with dependable and trusted sources for obtaining any information about the society. So it can be concluded that major cities can be most reliable sources for any society’s understanding, but as society contains different people that can have different objectives, tradition etc. there can be some unclear understanding also that one has to be careful about. Above information shows that study of major cities of any society provide good understanding about the society.
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the po 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40808823529 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92419213627 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488970588235 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9271120585 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165432323112 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765783467522 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192788710219 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165432323112 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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