The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.
Given is a graph elaborating the performance of top nations in the Olympic Games held in London in the year of 2012. All in all, the US was the winner of this championship in terms of gold medal earned.
With 46 gold medals and 29 silver medals, the US surpassed all the other countries in the leaderboard in respect to both gold and silver medal fetched. Likewise, numbering 104, the US also positioned on top of total medals earned. Second in terms of collective medals was China, and it saw 38 gold, 27 silver and 23 bronze ending up with 88 medal registered.
Although Russia obtained a remarkable number of 82 medals, it was outweighed by Great Britain attributing to the number of gold medals possessed. The British althelets contended for 29 gold, compared with a slightly smaller number of 24 gold was seized by the Russians. Meanwhile, positioned on the rank of 5 to 8, candidates coming from Korea, Germany, France and Italy got more than 20 medals for their countries.
Noteworthy is the fact that Hungary obtained less medals than that by Australia by half, though it outperformed Australia in the game regarding to gold medal earned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'medal' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'medals'.
Suggestion: medals
... silver and 23 bronze ending up with 88 medal registered. Although Russia obtained...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun medals is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...orthy is the fact that Hungary obtained less medals than that by Australia by half, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80904522613 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7173712411 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8146422049 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190247160032 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877357149555 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525044483346 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11715773715 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395861734374 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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