Given is a graph elaborating the performance of top nations in the Olympic Games held in London in the year of 2012. All in all, the US was the winner of this championship in terms of gold medal earned.
Accomplishing a result of 46 gold medals and 29 silver medals, the US surpassed all the other countries in the leaderboard in respect to both gold and silver medal fetched. Likewise, numbering 104, the US also positioned on top of total medals earned. Second in terms of acquisition of collective medals was China, and it saw 38 gold, 27 silver and 23 bronze ending up with overall 88 medals registered.
Although Russia obtained a remarkable number of 82 medals, it was outweighed by Great Britain attributing to the number of gold medals seized. The British althelets ultimately contended for 29 gold, compared with the Russian possession of a slightly smaller number of 24 gold medals. Meanwhile, positioned on the rank of 5 to 8, over 20 mixed medals was garnered by candidates coming from Korea, Germany, France and Italy.
Noteworthy is the fact that Hungary obtained less medals than that by Australia by half, though it outperformed Australia in the game regarding to gold medal earned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun medals is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...orthy is the fact that Hungary obtained less medals than that by Australia by half, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89268292683 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81144089054 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9675258024 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190891468511 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872934393595 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052517588769 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117092359748 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392893958956 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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