Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give yr opinion
Nowadays people are facing soaring crime rate around the world. This issue could be addressed by many solutions. There are those who argue that the most effective way to combat delinquency is prolonging the imprisonment. By contrast, others claim that there are more useful measures. In my opinion, it is more valuable in the second view.
The solution to put criminals in jail in longer period is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, prisoners have no opportunity to carry out a crime in the society. It is clear that there is strict management and schedule for criminals to follow closely on a daily basis. So they cannot escape and pose threats to the community. As a result, the crime rate might decline significantly and the society is safer as well. Secondly, imprisonment could rehabilitate the prisoners. Spending long time in jail can change their minds and characters. For example, rehabilitation service gives daily lectures to a murder so that he would look at his mistakes and realize how brutal his behavior was, then he will not re-offend when being released.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more realistic to tackle crime by other methods which concern root causes of the problem. There can be no doubt that providing compulsory education to every citizen in the society will reduce the number of offenders. Owing to lack of education, many young people are not aware of what is good and what is not, this causes them to have delinquent behavior. To use Vietnam as an example, almost people who did not go to school or in order words, not well-educated citizens, have committed crime. Furthermore, community work would help to reduce crime rate. In addition, providing stable and well-paying jobs for ex-offenders will help them not get involved in delinquent behavior anymore. When returning the community, if criminals settle their lives, they will change their mind and become better people. With a happy life outside, they are less likely to come back to prison.
In conclusion, longer prison sentences can be helpful to combat crime but I believe that there are more significant solutions such as spreading compulsory education and caring ex-offenders’ lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08815426997 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80451595585 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0988676962 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9545454545 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31818181818 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177090668169 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439574078135 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415048636307 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102735257414 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176226174307 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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