The mass media has a powerful influence on shaping peoples views and concepts? Do you agree/
Media either electronics, print or visual has strong ability to shape people's perspectives. As news spread as a speed of light through mass media, it can change built or renew one's opinion on a particular topic. I totally agree with this proposition because these mediums can present anything in an impactful way and mostly these are from authentic sources.
First of all, mass media, particularly broadcast media, social media and digital media has a trend to telecast live news, programmes, shows and so on which keep people up to date about what, where or what is happening around them. It's work as a spell bounder. Moreover, it could be helpful for people in need. For an example, several social organizations collect charity through a Facebook post. In addition, mass media is a powerful weapon for the general public as people consider it as an authentic source of news.
Another reason these media has an impressive impact on individuals mind is, it provides various information. Furthermore, this information is capable to change orthodox concepts by its effective presentation. For instance, in past people use to believe in superstitions, whereas, now they learn from various media such as television or radio that these wrongful thoughts can be life-threatening and they have no base. What is more, it could be beneficial to build a strong law against these baseless rules and regulations.
In conclusion, mass media is influential when it comes to shaping people views or concepts. In my opinion, most of the time this happen in a positive way because of its mesmerizing way of presentation and authenticity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12030075188 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96862063304 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6495253549 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257367526411 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843140168136 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903648538534 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151109062218 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461633026788 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.