The diagram show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The given diagram reveals the information about the stages and equipment used in the process of production in cement , and concrete production of cement for building purposes. The data is calebroted in per cantum.
It can be seen that in first diagram the production of cement is discribe. It involve the three stages such as : mixer , rotating heater , and grinder. Firstly , the limestone and clay is crushed in mixer , after the mixer the powder is heat in rotating heater. Furthermore , after the heat to grinder the all mixer , and then the cement is ready for the packing in bags.
As far as trend is concerned that the second diagram show that the concrete production of cement for any building purpose. It include the four type of material , and one machine for mixer that material. Addtion to this the 15% of cement , 10% of water , 25% of sand , and 50% small stone gravel is needed , after collecting that the all material are mixed in material , the concrete mixeris ready to use.
Overall , it is evident that the production of cement is very costly , and very time consuming process. On the other hand , the concrete production of cement is teh short , and very cheaper process. It is also save time as compare to cememt production process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82242990654 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52019194105 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490654205607 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2652202324 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383500376636 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133270738066 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143101399392 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247456942098 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140213138966 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.