These days young children spend a lot of time using computer, tablets and smartphones phones. Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial. Other believe that they would no benefits from introducing the children to technology at young age.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
With the steady growth in modernization the life style of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestone; however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such topic here is of introduction of technology to the children at a very young agr. The particular topic asserts that Do introduction of children to the technology at a very age is fruitful or noy?. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of given topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
To embark with, on the one side of argument there are groups of people who believe that it is fruitful for their children to introduce them towards technology at a very young age. Electronic devices like computer, tablets and smartphones flourish the motor skills of children because while playing games on these devices they unknowingly improve their hand eye coordination as they are playing games only by noticing on the screen. Moreover, it also improve the observation skills of children as children have to notice each single details in these devices.
However, there are groups of people who believe that these electronic devices effects the health as well as mobility of children as children always stay stick to games on electronic devices and procastinate the outdoor activities which in the long run leads to serious health issues like obesity as well as serious postural deformities like kyphosis and lyphosis. In addition to this, the games in electronic devices encourage the aggressive thoughts and felling among the children with those violent games which they play on these devices. For instance, murder of one student name " Parduman" by
Class mate at Ryan International School situated in New Delhi is also a result of aggressive thoughts of childrens.
Nevertheless, weighting both the opinion, I believe that introducing children to technology is fruitful for improving some skills, but as we all know "all glitter is not gold" these devices not only restrict the mobility of children but also indulge the essence of bitterness in their mind so parents should provide these electronic devices for fix period of time and encourage their children also for doing outdoor activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79448950573 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513736263736 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.542994712 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308048975519 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117561064258 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803161633565 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160775694296 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926817596439 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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