The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

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The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

The given histogram highlights the information about world wide sales of 3 multimedia factors (Games software, DVD or video and CDs), purchased by people in billions. The data is calibrated in billions.

It can be seen that in the year of 2000, sale of games software was 15 billion, sale of DVD or video was slightly more than games software and CDs had the maximum sale. Apart from this, CDs had maximum sale in the year of 2001. Moreover, global sale of games software and DVD or video were 18 million and 22 million respectively.

Moving further, 31 billion of both DVD or video and CDs were being sold in the year of 2003. In addition to this, sales of games software was remained same in 2002 and 2003. Furthermore, in the year of 2002, difference insale of games software and DVD or video was 5 billion.

Overall, it is evident that there was considerable incline in the sale of DVD or video from 2000 to 2003 and considerable drop in sale of CDs with in four years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52247191011 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50161543565 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3333333333 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396668516586 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171634985489 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10179749694 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252067912157 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623824398881 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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