Now days people throw away old things and adapt new things .do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages.
With the rise in modernisation a man has transferred his life tremondously he has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on the moon.nevertheless there are some issues which remains irrevocable and complex as ever for instance ,this topic asserts that old object throw away ; new object prefer is beneficial or not?I shall explore my dimensions through this topic through example and assertion and shape up my opinion by the end
To commence with,that of object throw away from society create many types of issues that are mostly harmful of everyone.however, demand for more increase the use of machinery through it inclined automatically into pollution that has so many dangerous effect for everyone.furthermore,due to it pollution spreads in every field that develop to country's into harmful effects .after that, through it electricity also waste that is so biggest effects.whereas,due to either increased into demand of machinery or also increase into employment.before it machinery produce soo many dangerous fule,gasses,rays external.
As apart from, through machinery damand effect on life about human, animal, plants external.however,they have influence on everyone's life that not benefits for it moreover,they have been unlimited amount of dangerous gasses that distroy multiple habitat as well as through extra resources.however resources effect on habitat that badly affected of this field.
As for as, through it economic and personal growth also takes place however ,they have improved every field due to advancement furthermore, after advancement they beneficial for nation and personal views.after that either they have more development or automatically technological also develop.however,they include country improve quantity.they have been develop by researches, discovery that role in economics and personal skills
In summary, nevertheless weighing both the option I believe that there is no single conculsion still , I take this ground that an effective clap requires both the use of hands that it is variable from person to person.however,it depends upon every persons thinking;that what they want.so it's responsibilities for every persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for instance, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74233128834 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63269327637 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 108.0 20.2975951904 532% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 293.431422994 49.4020404114 594% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 624.0 106.682146367 585% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 108.666666667 20.7667163134 523% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 48.3333333333 7.06120827912 684% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0412430404809 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241251270854 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023621155582 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0222330554436 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216280526153 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 59.9 13.0946893788 457% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.06 50.2224549098 -110% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.44779559118 307% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.8 11.3001002004 423% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.2 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.64 8.58950901804 159% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.2 10.1190380762 447% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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