The illustrations represents data of energy used in Australian households and the greenhouse gas emission produced from its use.
As its obvious from the pie chart, Australians use mainly energy for heating and water heating in 42 per cent and 30 per cent respectively. Cooling represented only small portion of energy used in Australians households with just only two per cent. Similar trend was seen in lighting and refrigeration ( 4% and 7%).
Second illustration shows percentage of gas emission produced from energy use. It is obvious, that water heating and using other appliances produced the most greenhouse gas emissions (32 per cent and 28 per cent). Followed heating and refrigeration with almost same percentage fifth-teen and fourth-teen per cent respectively. Cooling and lighting produced just small percentage of greenhouse gases in Australian households (3 and 8 per cent).
To sum up, Water heating as the one of the top way how Australians use energy pollute environment the most in compare to using of other appliances which does not represent majority of use, however, produce the second highest of greenhouse gas emissions.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010. 73
- Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? 91
- The Level of Air Pollution in Five Countries 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'represent'.
Suggestion: represent
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30939226519 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03587012776 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7126983879 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354253485889 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176144042397 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142063992403 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263821941618 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736220883345 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.