The maps illustrate the planned transformation of a university's sports centre after its refurbishment. Overall, as can be clearly seen, there will occur various changes making the centre much more modern and convenient.
Now, the sports centre is quite simple with three main parts, namely two outdoor courts on the two side and a main house in the middle which has a reception right at the front door, a changing room in the left, a seating area in the right, and a gym area. All of them are surrounding a 25-metre swimming pool.
However, manifold developments are going to modernize the whole area. The most notable of all must be the reconstruction that will merge all the current facilities into one large building, while adding several amenities. While the outdoor courts on the west side will be replaced by a leisure pool, the east side one would be converted to a smaller sports hall, making room to expand the gym area and erect two new dance studios in the northeastern corner. Apart from that, two changing rooms will be built in two opposite corner near the entrance, next to a sports shop and a café.
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 11
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 96
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...llustrate the planned transformation of a universitys sports centre after its ref...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'corner' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'corners'.
Suggestion: corners
...ing rooms will be built in two opposite corner near the entrance, next to a sports sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75384615385 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60760028076 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1464415799 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140157113544 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627229242567 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607309758641 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111178269721 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565025581854 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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