It is believed by some people that artificially intelligent machines will replace humans as workforce over a period of time. Both advantages and disadvantages of using robots instead of humans for doing jobs are discussed in this essay and a corresponding opinion is formed based on them.
Firstly, advancing technology has certainly made life of humans easier as most of the work in industries are now done by machines. Some people feel that buying machines to produce quality products is a one time investment as usually machines are less prone to errors than humans. For instance, machines in automobile industry are capable of building cars and trucks by themselves once they are equipped with adequate resources. Moreover, artificially intelligent robots are now matching their skills with human brain capabilities. Therefore, we ought to see more and more of these robots in posterity.
However, robots seem to be ideal for doing jobs for humans in future, they might affect human existence adversely. A reason for this impact is that there would be lesser jobs left for humans to sustain their livelihood. Additionally, artificially intelligent robots might have the capability to reproduce themselves. Thus, they pose a major threat to replace human race as also depicted in one of the Hollywood movie series "The Terminator". As an illustration, current generation of these robots when interviewed also hinted their intention to dominate humans.
To conclude, though artificial intelligent machines may ease the life of humans, they also pose a threat to their very existence. Therefore, humans must be cautious while developing these machines in future.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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...autious while developing these machines in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42366412214 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99464637009 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7171625375 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131732190252 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482862904063 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537874079202 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924903629409 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575834539131 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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