The line graph above gives information on average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011.
It is evident that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar, so a strong correlation is suggested.
In 2000, the index of food price was about 90 points. The same pattern can be seen for oil price, just below $30 per barrel. Over following four years, both prices did not change too much, even decreased in period 2012-2013, before jumping up significantly between 2004 and 2007. By 2007, the average of oil price had more than double to nearly $60 per barrel, food price rose by around 50 points.
In 2008, average global prices of both oil and food rose suddenly, with oil price reaching a peak of approximately $130, world food index reaching to 220 points. By 2009, the figure for both commodities fall significantly, at $40 for average oil prices and 140 points for food price index, before rising one again in 2011. By 2011, oil cost reached at $100 per barrel, while index of food price peaked at 240 points.
The line graph above gives information on average price of a barrel of oil and the food price index from 2000 to 2011.
It is evident that a dramatic increase in both commodity price was seen over period shown. Furthermore, the trend for both commodities were similar, so a strong correlation is suggested.
In 2000, the index of food price was about 90 points. The same pattern can be seen for oil price, just below $30 per barrel. Over following four years, both prices did not change too much, even decreased in period 2012-2013, before jumping up significantly between 2004 and 2007. By 2007, the average of oil price had more than double to nearly $60 per barrel, food price rose by around 50 points.
In 2008, average global prices of both oil and food rose suddenly, with oil price reaching a peak of approximately $130, world food index reaching to 220 points. By 2009, the figure for both commodities fall significantly, at $40 for average oil prices and 140 points for food price index, before rising one again in 2011. By 2011, oil cost reached at $100 per barrel, while index of food price peaked at 240 points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph above gives information on average pric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65326633166 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45398036789 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6775839989 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.652666873176 0.215688989381 303% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292466160106 0.103423049105 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153961937356 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.451065592668 0.15604864568 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098244209267 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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