"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
The argument climes the out of the real estate firms in their town Adams reality and Fitch reality to be persisted, Adams realty is most efficient firm to sell your house based on certain past assumptions from which there no clear evidence to judge from both of the firms. hence this argument is unsubstantiated and incomplete. however, certain evidence reveals that it little credible support for the author's argument.
First of all, the arguments suggested that the Adams realty has 40 real estate agents where as Fitch realty has 25 real estate agents and they are working part-time and so both the firm can not be compared based on there agents.and due to which it also rases many questions which are, does all the real estate agents of Adams' firm are more efficient then the agents of Fitch's' firm?, if yes the are they all works in part time or they works full time?, so due to such kind of evidence we can not assume that the both the firm are of same level to compete.
Secondly, author listed that the Adams revenue for the last year was twice as high then that of Fitch. This evidence leads to many questions as do last year revenue list is ideal for all the year to judge? , does all the factors remains same from the last year list?. and the author also stated that the average home sale by Adams is of $168000 and that of Fitch is of $144000 so that does not mean that both are saling the same kind of home, because it may possible that the house one firm sales may be the easy one to sale at higher price.
Thirdly, the author conclude that the house he sold ten year ago by Fitch realty taker over four month, while another house sold by Adams realty last year took only one year.this evidence leads to questions as, does the Fitch realty also take over four month to sale the house last year? does the Adams realty also take one month or around to sale the house every time? by such kind of evidence we can not be unbious.
Lastly it is not fix the the evidence that author conclusion may be the one for the next time when we sale the house.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: This evidence leads to many questions as do last year revenue list is ideal for all the year to judge? , does all the factors remains same from the last year list?. and the author also stated that the average home sale by Adams is of 168000 and that of Fitch is of 144000 so that does not mean that both are saling the same kind of home, because it may possible that the house one firm sales may be the easy one to sale at higher price.
Error: saling Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Thirdly, the author conclude that the house he sold ten year ago by Fitch realty taker over four month, while another house sold by Adams realty last year took only one year.this evidence leads to questions as, does the Fitch realty also take over four month to sale the house last year? does the Adams realty also take one month or around to sale the house every time? by such kind of evidence we can not be unbious.
Error: unbious Suggestion: No alternate word
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not OK.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1641 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.273 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.942 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 54.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 32.273 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.492 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.837 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.303 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The argument climes the out of the real estate firms in their town Adams re...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...idence to judge from both of the firms. hence this argument is unsubstantiated and in...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...idence to judge from both of the firms. hence this argument is unsubstantiated and in...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ment is unsubstantiated and incomplete. however, certain evidence reveals that it littl...
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Line 1, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...that it little credible support for the authors argument. First of all, th...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ible support for the authors argument. First of all, the arguments sugges...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents suggested that the Adams realty has 40 real estate agents where as Fitch rea...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...Adams realty has 40 real estate agents where as Fitch realty has 25 real estate agents ...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...agents of Adams firm are more efficient then the agents of Fitchs firm?, if yes the...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rm are more efficient then the agents of Fitchs firm?, if yes the are they all wo...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hen the agents of Fitchs firm?, if yes the are they all works in part time or they wo...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
... Fitchs firm?, if yes the are they all works in part time or they works full time?,...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...firm?, if yes the are they all works in part time or they works full time?, so due to su...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...s the are they all works in part time or they works full time?, so due to such ki...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...re they all works in part time or they works full time?, so due to such kind of evid...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...y all works in part time or they works full time?, so due to such kind of evidence we c...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...l time?, so due to such kind of evidence we can not assume that the both the firm...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...the firm are of same level to compete. Secondly, author listed that the A...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as high 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...nue for the last year was twice as high then that of Fitch. This evidence leads to...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the last year was twice as high then that of Fitch. This evidence leads to m...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast year was twice as high then that of Fitch. This evidence leads to many quest...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ist is ideal for all the year to judge? , does all the factors remains same from ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... remains same from the last year list?. and the author also stated that the average...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...the easy one to sale at higher price. Thirdly, the author conclude that ...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... the house he sold ten year ago by Fitch realty taker over four month, while anot...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ar ago by Fitch realty taker over four month, while another house sold by Adams real...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...es the Fitch realty also take over four month to sale the house last year? does the ...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o take over four month to sale the house last year? does the Adams realty also ta...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Does
...our month to sale the house last year? does the Adams realty also take one month or...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...or around to sale the house every time? by such kind of evidence we can not be unb...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ind of evidence we can not be unbious. Lastly it is not fix the the evide...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...us. Lastly it is not fix the the evidence that author conclusion may be ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the next time when we sale the house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 384.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38020833333 5.12650576532 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99092899915 2.78398813304 72% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434895833333 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.778278758 57.8364921388 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.324526521 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.70786347227 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.25449101796 647% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370735907198 0.218282227539 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122329992664 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111192512707 0.0701772020484 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193895761772 0.128457276422 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963272297158 0.0628817314937 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 12.5979740519 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.