you have had bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. you know that this information is incorrec

Dear Mis/Madam,

I am IMI, 236547 account holders. I am writing respond to your notification letter that I have received yesterday. It mentioned that I had 240$ dept and I will charge 70$, which is I did not.

Actually, I am used to work with your bank currency but for some reason my home country has disconnected with universe, I have never touch my credit card since October 2017 in order I have moved oversea. I even did inactivation through the internet before I left. I will attach my online statement, which is could be approved my claim that I have had not any transactions.

Would you please advise your staff to check my data to solve the personally issue. In case if there is some unknown transaction give me in detail to follow up it. I am extremely appreciating you for your consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully
IMI

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$240'.
Suggestion: $240
...ived yesterday. It mentioned that I had 240$ dept and I will charge 70$, which is I ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$70'.
Suggestion: $70
... that I had 240$ dept and I will charge 70$, which is I did not. Actually, I am ...
^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
..., which is I did not. Actually, I am used to work with your bank currency but for some re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'touched'.
Suggestion: touched
...isconnected with universe, I have never touch my credit card since October 2017 in or...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... will attach my online statement, which is could be approved my claim that I have ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81228061306 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0450731385 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304695166641 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102674431061 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644711918336 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172492978229 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331415745767 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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