There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Globally, there are several kinds of music which we tend to enjoy either for comfort or past memory. Traditionally music has its crucial benefits to the society at large and it should not go into extinction, on the other hand, international music which appears popular also some vital roles in the society.
This essay will discuss the benefits of traditional music and why it should not be forgotten and also international music roles in d society considering the popularity.
Traditional music which is mostly enjoyed by elderly people in the society often appear boring by the young people of our society today meanwhile it educates and gives deep understanding of our culture and history in general. Traditional music also passes sensitive information about how a society can be united irrespective of language differences. An example could be seen from a particular music which comprises of different languages and was enjoyed by everyone, which brought about union among all tribes in the society.
International music which seems popular and mostly enjoyed by youths does not really add value to the society though have its own peculiar advantage to the youths in our society. Oftentimes our youths get wrong information from international music which does not help the society at large. Bad languages, indecent dressing and bad communication skills are been derived subconsciously from international music.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that traditional music is of more benefit to the society than international music as it brings advancement and union to the society at large.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memory'.
Suggestion: memory
... we tend to enjoy either for comfort or past memory. Traditionally music has its crucial be...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...d be seen from a particular music which comprises of different languages and was enjoyed by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97660750415 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2801439918 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342480337307 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162757384943 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653449711072 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23152837914 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490396029667 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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