Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well, while others feel that teachers should only teach academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has been controversial whether the teachers’ job is to mainly deliver academic lectures or to assist the students on their decisions and behavior. In my opinion, I believe that every teacher from all educational institutes has the balance on both aspects.
On the one hand, teaching main subjects is essential to prepare for the students’ future career. It is quite fundamental to transfer all required skills that students need when they apply for an occupation later in their lives. Since the young cannot firmly develop these abilities and academic knowledge by their own effort, it is absolutely the teachers’ duty to take care of this task for the sake of students’ future. Moreover, parents pay a huge amount of money to make sure their children get the best education as much as possible. Thus, teachers are demanded to carry out this job of lecturing academic lessons without a doubt since they are making a living out of this.
On the other hand, along with being filled with academic knowledge, students are also in need of advices and suggestion from the teachers to guide them. Firstly, most of the students are in the age group of six to eighteen, in which these individuals still are not fully in control of making correct decisions. This is when teachers step in, their advices will greatly impact on the pupils’ prejudice judgements. For example, a teacher would interfere school violence and give suggestion to the kids who assault the others, which eventually turn a bully into a better person with greater humane concept. Secondly, during the time that young people have to stay at school, teachers are the ones whom these individuals mostly interact with and look up to, not the parents. Therefore, the responsibility of guiding correct choices and behavior is apparently belong to the teachers.
In conclusion, while teaching academic subjects is important for children’s career, it is also the duty of the teachers to support the students on making right decisions and actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 861, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13213213213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84374078221 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9783478751 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227656973473 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077182297852 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496215149434 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153023975213 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024950677485 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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