the diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth
The given process illustrate the steps involved in the life span cycle of the silkworm as well as the manufacture of silk cloth.
Overall, it is remarkable that the first diagram goes through four consecutive steps, meanwhile, there are five constant stages in the second one, beginning with selecting cocoon and finishing with weaving.
To beginning with the life span of silkworm, eggs hatching on the leaf after 10-day birth convert into small silkworm larva. A larva is nourished by sources of mulberry leaf day in day out during 4 or 5 weeks. Before becoming cocoon, larva is covered around silk thread over the period of 3 or 6 days and then it is mature as a moth.
With regard to the production of silk cloth, firstly, not only are some cocoons having the highest quality collected, but they also are boiled with water at restricted temperature. Over the course of third stage, boiled cocoon have capability of unwinding in order to take thread of which length is approximately 300 to 900 meter. Once dying the thread, it is twisted and weaved to produced silk cloth effectively and gorgeously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...hich length is approximately 300 to 900 meter. Once dying the thread, it is twisted a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, third, well, while, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86243386243 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59005382662 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9605057922 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 5.23603664747 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248167791928 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984233464875 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809697509052 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14619581913 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837414281576 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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