The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of the silkworm and the process of manufacturing silk cloth.
In general, the life cycle of the silkworm is a natural process which includes a series 5 main stages, from eggs to mature moth. The manufacturing of silk cloth, in contrast, is a man-made linear process involving 6 main steps which begin with cocoon and end with silk material.
At the beginning of the silkworm's life cycle, a massive number of eggs are laid by mature moth, and after 10 days, hatching into silkworm larvas. The larva feeds on mulberry leaves during 4 to 6 weeks before forming silk thread. The stage of silk thread forming lasts 3 to 8 days to construct a full cocoon where a mature moth develops and emerges out after 16 days. At this point, a cycle has been completed and a new cycle will begin.
For silk cloth production, a cocoon is first selected and then boiled in water. After being boiled, the silk thread is unwound into 300 to 900 mm long strands which are twisted together in the subsequent step. At the fifth and sixth stages, the thread can either be dyed and woven into silk fabric, or it can be woven first and then dyed subsequently.
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- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
...silk material. At the beginning of the silkworms life cycle, a massive number of eggs ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54929577465 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43329306955 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4963155513 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220751493323 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987355620974 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759620040392 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165358447851 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836434392366 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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