The provided bar chart outlines informations about senior developer men employees working for IBM, Microsoft and Apple from 1980 to 2010. It is seen from the illustration, that IBM over the compared period experienced significant increase peaking in 2010, when percentage of senior developers in Apple remained almost same. Only in 1990, all three compared IT companies had similar amount of male IT specialist.
IBM over three decades increased number of senior male employees almost sixty times from beginning roughly three percent in 1980 to more than sixty per cent in 2010.
Microsoft had slightly below and little above 10 per cent of senior developers for two decades. Number of senior male developers increased almost three times from about 15 per cent in 2000 to approximately 45 per cent in 2010.
Data of Apple male senior developers remained almost and did not showed any significant increase from 1980 to 2010 (15 per cent, 25 per cent).
- Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extend do you agree? 11
- Full time university student spend most of their time in academic subjects. Some people say that they should engage in other activities also . Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Directors and managers of organizations are often older people Some people say that it is better for younger people to be leaders To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- Some people believe bicycle have a lot of advantages, while others believe bicycle have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
... developers remained almost and did not showed any significant increase from 1980 to 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63282895327 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.410000976 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28599813175 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146064577436 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555037149133 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181800495741 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587499630987 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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