Some national museums have seen an persistent growth on their admission fees of most classes for past decades. While some hold to the negative sentiment that the charge of entering such a public facility should be either declined or made entirely free for all citizens, I personally believe that it is palatable for the operation team of museum to charge the visitors. The reasons for my position are as follows.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the running cost of a qualified museum is not negligible. In fact, operating a museum ensues numerous routine works like cleaning, repairmen, property management with ceaseless security control. Meanwhile, these ensuring efforts, coupled with the salary for tour guide who is responsible for organising tour and expound the detail of each pieces to visitors, result in the colossal expenditure. Moreover, to sustain the colour and vibrancy, a regular acquisition for exhibition has an important role to play, which in turn brings more attractions for visitors.
Further and more importantly, though, is that the antithetical view tends to paradoxically rise the cost for maintaining a museum. Some standing on the contrary argue that the fee is a barrier for people in penury, which then causes the amenity to be a playground for affluent families. However, there has been a special fee subsidising by the government for concession such as disabled, elderly and children of certain age group. By contrast, placing a full allowance for all visitors is likely to result an influx to the museum, which then lead to a surge in operation cost, not to mention the hassles are to be induced.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that it is reasonable to buy a ticket prior to entering a museum, no matter public or private, because the visitor is responsible for the cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Some national museums have seen an persistent growth on their admission fe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in fact, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04262295082 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85897879356 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4586477354 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202469325959 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752547582894 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441464604091 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124994122621 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062327496514 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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