Nowadays the importance of teachers is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative sources to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is claimed that these days the significance of educators is dissipating because of alternative options which are easily available for pupils. However, I believe that though several other ways to educate are aplenty, yet none take the place of teachers and thus they are not losing their importance.
Firstly, as it is said, better than a thousand days of diligent study is one day with a great teacher and hence alternative resources seem insignificant in front of good teachers. Additionally, a great tutor can teach the nuances of a subject in a simple way. Secondly, a teacher can teach not only about particular field of study but also instill confidence and spirit into students’ mind which is the key to success in their life ahead.
Nevertheless, the rapid progress in technology and the advent of computer, has altered the way of education. Besides, several software and websites are available on the internet where students can learn quickly besides prepare for their tests any time. Moreover, online learning is very cheap compared to hiring a teacher as well as save a colossal amount of time for students.
In conclusion, it is felt that in this modern era, the value of teachers is dying out owing to easy accessibility of different resources of study. Nonetheless, according to me, a teacher who has great knowledge is much more valuable vis-à-vis other options for learning which are in vogue.
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...utor can teach the nuances of a subject in a simple way. Secondly, a teacher can teach not only...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some software'.
Suggestion: some software
... altered the way of education. Besides, several software and websites are available on the inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05508474576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85748775722 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4864375603 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.3 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984239664181 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356682712495 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026038988764 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056115058022 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00965921281409 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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